• A rough cut of the film has been generated.
  • Some concerns from the tutorial is that there may be too many unnecessary shots: for example Day 2 of the office scene may not be needed as it is already established where Andie works.
  • Certain moments linger too much or not enough, so should be shortened.
  • Jini’s view is that the ending is not as powerful as it could be. Instead, we should end with Andie walking away from the pier.
  • With this taken in account, the second draft of the film is in motion, and the concern points will be reviewed and possibly amended.

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