- A rough cut of the film has been generated.
- Some concerns from the tutorial is that there may be too many unnecessary shots: for example Day 2 of the office scene may not be needed as it is already established where Andie works.
- Certain moments linger too much or not enough, so should be shortened.
- Jini’s view is that the ending is not as powerful as it could be. Instead, we should end with Andie walking away from the pier.
- With this taken in account, the second draft of the film is in motion, and the concern points will be reviewed and possibly amended.